First RP in quite a while, grateful for feedback

["Gentleman" Jim Douglas]

Just posted my first RP in a good few months, with a new character - superiorwrestlingfed.proboards.com/index.cgi?action=display&board=rp1&thread=108&page=1#831

Despite the obvious lack of match talk (which will be coming in RP 2), I'd be interested to hear any feedback on this piece, how the character's coming across, and perhaps most importantly, whether I'm too "British" for the majority of the roster!

Any comments gratefully received, and I'll endeavour to respond in kind.

["Gentleman" Jim Douglas]

The follow up RP, Living The Gimmick, Pt. 2 has just been posted (superiorwrestlingfed.proboards.com/index.cgi?action=display&board=rp1&thread=121)

I really am interested in any thoughts any of you guys might have on the style (as it's something slightly different to what I'm used to writing) and the actual character (as this is my first time writing as 'Gentleman' Jim).

All feedback, on one or both of the RPs, will be reciprocated, and is gratefully received

[Andre Dixon]

I will try to get to this soon but I've just been so busy here lately that I haven't had time to fully read all the rps. So at some point after I post my second rp I'll definitely give you some feedback.