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Post by lancestevens on Jun 22, 2012 0:22:23 GMT -6
Just did my second rp for this week show ! What did I do wrong ??
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Post by GM Jeffrey James on Jun 22, 2012 1:07:20 GMT -6
Your post will not go unnoticed. I've got a busy couple of days ahead for me. But I'll share my rp grades with you and show you the categories in which you can improve.
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Post by Andre Dixon on Jun 22, 2012 1:10:36 GMT -6
First of all I LOVE the idea. I am a huge Cheers fan and think that's a great setting for a rp.
With that said you didn't do much with it. I thought you did a good job of match talk. You talked about your opponents and there were no points where I thought this has nothing to do with wrestling.
The thing I would have liked to see you do is add more story. I would have had them say my name as I entered the bar just like they do to Norm. You could have walked in and everyone scream "Lance!"
Then Norm goes straight into asking you a question. That never happens. I would have liked to seen you sit with them and talk with them instead of you just talking a bunch. Again I don't mind you having the trash talk in there but you could have also had some dialogue between you and Norm and some of the other bar members. You could even go as far as having them insult your opponent. That's what I like to do a lot. Be hanging out with a celebrity maybe and have them trash talk as well as me. Just subtle shots.
If you put more story with it I think you can do very good here. That's just my opinion though.
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Post by Andre Dixon on Jun 22, 2012 1:12:50 GMT -6
Your post will not go unnoticed. I've got a busy couple of days ahead for me. But I'll share my rp grades with you and show you the categories in which you can improve. Could you possibly pm me as well and let me know how you think I can improve as well. I'm always trying to get better. |
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Post by GM Jeffrey James on Jun 22, 2012 1:34:16 GMT -6
No problem. I was just talking to other staff members about how we need to do something to provide feedback to you guys because so many of you are looking for it. So we will be coming up with that answer soon. But yes... anyone who wants to see my scores just let me know and I will PM you your scores.
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Post by Alexis Prodigy on Jun 22, 2012 2:27:50 GMT -6
What I've done before in feds where I ran things was write all mine and the staffs judging scores and thoughts on what was good and what could be improved ...and would send the results via pm for whoever wanted them. I believe that between staff there should be a written judging record anyways, even if not shown to the handlers.
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Post by lancestevens on Jun 23, 2012 0:36:45 GMT -6
Here is what is new to me ! I've been in fed's that are all about the trash talk . This is the first one I've joined that wants me to tell a story with each rp !!! Lance is a new character for me , and I want to make him work !
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